Some people say that a person’s success is as a direct result of the way they were brought up by their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
The definition of success varies from person to person. Although some people claim that an individual’s success is directly proportionate with their parent’s upbringing, I, however, disagree with this view for two reasons.
The first reason why the achievement of success is not a direct connection with the upbringing of a guardian is due to trying multiple time until it is achieved. While it is argued that everyone in their life strives for having success, I believe that most of them quit in the middle and often do not give the next try or second chance to tasting it. Consider Elon Musk as an example, who has experienced the success for sending the rocket in Mars at his tenth attempt despite having the failure several times. Thus, a person should not quit before achieving their goal.
The talent with hard work in life is another reason. Whereas I concede that many of them do the hard work to become successful one day in the future, I would argue that hard work will not pay off until an individual has the talent in that particular field. For example, if any industrialist compelled their child to become a businessman despite having the talent of singing, their continuous efforts in the business would not give a fruitful result. Therefore, any person could get success with their hard work if they worked in the field where their interest is.
In short, not only does an individual get success in their life because of multiple tries, but also choosing the right field with an attitude of hard work. Therefore, I strongly disagree with the view of those who connect the success with the nurture of the family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83687943262 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60255665487 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549645390071 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4163416527 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210402669832 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845176206465 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581956457354 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143220678218 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738773203656 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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