The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the quantity of carbon emissions produced by 6 countries in 1975,1990 and 2005.
Overall,the largest amount of carbon emissions produced by USA and China in 2005.
The USA emitted the largest amount of carbon for all 3 years and slightly increase over 1200000 thousand metric tonnes in 1975 and under the 1600000 thousand metric tonnes in 2005. The same amount of carbon emissions produced by Germany in 1975 and 1990.(approximately 250000 thousand metric tonnes).After that slightly decreased in 2005. Only the amount of carbon emissions fluctuated by United Kingdom during the 3 different years.(under the 200000 thousand metric tonnes).China's level of carbon emissions more than doubled from 300000 thousand metric tonnes in 1975 to over 600000 thousand metric tonnes in 1990 before more than doubling anew to approximately 1.6 million thousand metric tonnes in 2005. Canada's level increased slightly each year to match the UK in 2005 and carbon emissions in India jumped feom approximately 80000 in 1975 to 380000 in 2005.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34337349398 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82771495013 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475903614458 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.7213473274 43.030603864 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.833333333 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 5.23603664747 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145180130195 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947190775343 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479910508301 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132158304877 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356483163212 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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