Industrialization and globalization has made our life much easier which we could have never thought before, but on the downside, now we don't have sufficient time to spend with our family. I completely agree that today we are living in a fast pace environment and our life is in so much stress, which is affecting our social and personal life. On one hand new generation is becoming rebel towards their parents, on the other side, more and more people are attempting suicide because of lack of peace of mind.
Let's start as a family, a baby needs the attention of both parents, but unfortunately, due to the burden of work parents are not able to give enough time to their kids. In this case, children feel abandon, they not lose their self-esteem but also move towards criminal activities, such as drugs etc. For instance, China reported the highest juvenile delinquencies last year, and we all know that the absence and ignorance from parents attributed to this sharp trend of crimes.
Another key justification, for upholding this notion is that modern life doesn’t let an individual take a rest from their busy routine for a moment. Few decades ago, people in their leisure time go on dinner with their families or visit their parents, but now they don't have spare time and stress level has gone so high that it has now became impossible for them to tackle. High level stress, disappointment and a lack of social support lead to suicide. As an illustration, in India alone more than a million people attempted suicides in 2018, due to the high level of stress. Therefore, it is indispensable to have a balanced life, to form a healthy and happy society.
To conclude, blessings of modern life costed us a fortune. We should walk side by side with the rest of the world but should never start a race that may end our life in a devastating way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: Let's
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71076923077 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71632539815 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578461538462 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3636132153 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.769230769 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140845081504 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524071221197 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458669982897 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790804768081 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521751301185 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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