In today's world technology has become an inevitable part of people’s lives accordingly, many companies use modern technology to holding their meetings or courses which could have more advantageous as disadvantages.
On the bright side, the meeting organizer could throw a huge conference directly in their office. For example, multi-nationality businesses like oil companies want to have a meeting with their investors and clients who may live in other countries or cities, so they can easily attend to the meeting in their hometown by using an online speaking application like Skype. In addition, business owners sometimes want to cut the budget down in order to save money for the tasks. Obviously, every seminar needs preparation like finding a place to holding a meeting, decorations, catering even print the content for everybody who will come and it is cost a lot for the company.
On the other hand, online courses have received a lot of attention from people. For instance, every man and woman who have a passion to learn something new about a particular subject can submit in online classes regardless of distance or they're personal schedule.
On the negative side, this kind of event is necessary for all firms and taking all of them online could be a leading factor in losing investors' interest. As an illustration, companies always want other people who have large and famous organizations to invest money in their brand and buy their products or services so that when they take everything online, investors never can trust them as a real company.
In conclusion, even though loses support from big companies is one of the negative side effects of this phenomenon, many companies take many advantages from this technology development and use it wisely in order to grow and save money for extending their business.
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- You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.Write a letter to the parents. In your letter- Explain why you would like the job- Give details of why you wo 61
- Some people argue that competitive sports are good for bringing together different people and cultures Others argue that these sports can cause problems and increase conflicts between nations Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion 67
- Some people think that prison sentences should not be used in dealing with criminals. Education and job training should be used instead.To what extent do you agree on disagree? 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...nline classes regardless of distance or theyre personal schedule. On the negative sid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85690391858 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576666666667 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5959318303 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.7 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134745258433 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485456052988 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337017460412 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691129643494 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370448131915 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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