Nowadays more and more business meetings and business training are taking place online.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Technology has made a rapid growth in the past decade because of which numerous advancement can be enjoyed by humans, and online meeting and sessions are one of them. Now, if this method has more advantages or disadvantages that we are going to discuss in this essay. The following paragraphs takes a look at both advantages as well as disadvantages of the central idea before making a final note.
Let’s take the first advantage of this advancement, online training sessions and business meetings has made our life’s effortless. You have full leverage to attend these online meeting from home or from anywhere else, where you feel comfortable and peaceful. On the other hand, the drawback of this is we have less human interaction because of them, and you do not get a chance to celebrate after meeting; nevertheless, chance of making new friends.
Whereas, with these virtual meetings and sessions trainer can address numerous audience at once and this can minimize the cost of organizing the event. Just few things needs to be ensure a good internet connection, as lost connection could be a major difficulty at both the ends, from sender or receiver. Furthermore, audiences can record the training or meeting with the permission from host and can learn from it later. While the drawback of this factor is as the number of audiences are more; therefore, host cannot respond each of the audience and answering their query becomes difficult. Still to overcome this, they can post their queries and host can get back to them even after meeting is over.
Taking everything into consideration, I believe it is true advantages of virtual meetings or trainings surpass the drawbacks brought by it. When technology is dominating in every field then it is a great idea to implement it for saving cost and time for education or business purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, still, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0355987055 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77111862961 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585760517799 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.4617803568 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.692307692 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241508234576 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084608117059 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713915971788 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143932073195 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374578548584 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.