a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
I disagree with the statement that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. Every student is different. Some students are good at maths, some are good at arts. They should be given the opportunity to study what they like most.
Many students like computer programming. But they can not acquire deeper knowledge for shortage of time. National curriculum burdened with courses from all the disciples do not spare any time. As a result, that student concerned about the grades, forget his/her passion about programming.
If that student was given extra time and support to learn his desired subject, he/she would have made wonder. But now he/she is unwilling to study at all rather studying programming.
However, there should be a threshold in similarity of curriculum where students must study basics. For example, basic math, language, science, accounting, finance. It should be a bit more than introduction. So that, they dost hesitate to encounter these topics in real life. But, then again, these common courses should not be any burden.
Thus, it is best to design courses for each student adapted to their strength and passion along with some core common courses that introduce the vastness of knowledge to all students
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 222, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...t more than introduction. So that, they dost hesitate to encounter these topics in r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, thus, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 211.0 442.535393258 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21800947867 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54039046252 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 215.323595506 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616113744076 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2622529394 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8125 118.986275619 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1875 23.4991977007 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40949693676 0.243740707755 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120490706617 0.0831039109588 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174130957859 0.0758088955206 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203164822334 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171792674382 0.0667264976115 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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