Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trend of today's world is colossal upsurge in the number of people watching news on web instead of reading newspapers. There is a widespread worry that this will only leads to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and i will explain why in this essay.
There are number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that people's can eassily access to news by using internet. The most preponderant one is that internet cannot only contribute in spreading information and knowledge, but also leads to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benifits more when it comes to beign effective, but they can also provide information and knowldge, with much ease, efficiency and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the a for mentioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus providing such essential attributes as accuracy and variety of information.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that benefits of internet are indeed to great to ignor. I personally believe that internet is a great source of information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97142857143 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77484986142 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579591836735 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6009311064 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136492547684 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540509872707 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591287690956 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078241988324 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512452681555 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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