In many countries, academic education is closely tied to students' financial condition. Accordingly, it is argued that universities should provide a special arrangement for those who can not afford their tuition and I agree with this statement.
Above all, there are many students in the world with high potential in science and technology who have to stop studying because they are poor. For example, many parents unwillingly decided to dose not allow their children to go to college because they cannot pay educational tuition fees and other expenses like books, materials which some subjects required or for college campuses. So that this child may not be able to get a good job in the feature.
Apart from tuition, all big and well-known university is located in big cities. Students from rural areas in the country at the same time study and work in their families farmland, for instance, have to apply for university in order cities which means they spend a long time traveling between their home and college. So that it could be another reason for the university officials to help those pupils to stay at college dormitory for free.
Last but not least, equal educational opportunity is necessary for all students. Obviously, academic organizations can provide the best way that all interest and talented young people could be studying in the academic filed. As an illustration, universities could give them a full scholarship to cover the costs. In addition, students from rural areas provide a transportation system or low fee accommodation for their study period.
In conclusion, I believe that governments should help universities to make study easier for all needy people, also it could leading factors to improve the educational system in society.
- Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantagesDiscuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However,other people think that zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- More and more people want to own famous brands of cars, clothes and other items. What are the reasons for this? Is this a negative or positive trend? 89
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 56
- The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...jects required or for college campuses. So that this child may not be able to get a goo...
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Line 8, column 125, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...ier for all needy people, also it could leading factors to improve the educational syst...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, may, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1958041958 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8200118995 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3415430805 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.307692308 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189244998169 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651339668869 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333511316113 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103066132339 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282150882601 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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