A colleague at work is organizing a goodbye party which you are not able to attend. Write a latter to him/her.
In the letter you should:
Explain reason why you cannot attend
good memories you have spent
how you will stay in touch
Dear John,
I am writing to express my admiration to you and wish you all the best in your further endeavours. It has always been my pleasure to work alongside and you have probably been my best friend ever.
Unfortunately, I'm sorry to have to tell you that I will not be able to go to your farewell party. I have tried to carry over my business trip to Moscow from Friday to Monday, but the customer I have to meet answered that the deal in question is rather urgent and thus cannot be postponed. Thinking back about the time we spent working side by side, you have always been probably the most reliant and extremely proficient member of our team. Without doubt, your resignation is a tremendous lose for our company. I hope we will stay friends in the future and have even more beer again. I believe you have my email and phone number so I hope we will stay in touch.
The best of luck with all your endeavors.
Best regards,
Tom
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...y best friend ever. Unfortunately, Im sorry to have to tell you that I will n...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46285714286 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36563146853 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617142857143 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6344413214 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268340207001 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103668247596 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893642260004 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157108402761 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111221223006 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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