Every person has different capabilities and different grasping power but some people are born with creativity and specific talents. These people have god gifted talents. It is also true that with hard work and constant practice one can learn new things and become expert. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss it in detail.
First, let's talk about people with god gifted talent. Some people are born with a creative mind and with specific talents like Lata Mangeshkar born with a very pleasing voice, Sachin Tendulkar born with great cricketing talent. Such people show up their creativity and talent at a very early stage of their life.
On the other hand, creativity and talent can be developed as well with the right guidance and hard work. Like with a good coach and good coaching facilities people become a very successful sportsperson. For example, cricketer Farooq Engineer born with a physical disability but with hard work, he becomes a very successful and world-class spin bowler. Another example is Dr Abdul Kalam Aazad, he was born in a very poor family but with his hard work and right guidance he became a very renowned scientist.
To conclude, I can say that some people are born with creativity and god gifted talents. However, it is also true that creativity and talent can also be developed with the right guidance and constant hard work and a person can become a good sportsperson, musician or dancer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95850622407 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5458384407 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514522821577 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8357950828 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9230769231 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323500026659 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133084725265 0.0925447433944 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798851387975 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235439055219 0.151781067708 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073746675638 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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