The foremost advantage of an apartment is, it makes a convenient choice for people who can not afford monthly home loan payments.to put in simply those employs have fewer wages to pay in installments, the better way is to buy a tenement in lessee for a certain period of time, which allows people to live without anxious and also available rooms for families in less rent
Another benefit of the owner of an apartment need not bother about insurance and home maintenance. inother words to explain, the people living in the home should bear the expense of preservation according to the needs while the people in flats should not spend much money for the maintenance or repairs, which would help them to save money for people getting less wages. There are, however, some disadvantages that cannot be ignored. The lower monthly rent has less square footage and cramped space providing small room for the entire family, which don't access to the balcony and more facilities and less privacy
To conclude, living in an apartment such as saving money and other resources. however it is not free from drawbacks.
- More people have unhealthy diet and do not do enough exercises What are the reasons for this How can we encourage people to have a healthier lifestyle 84
- Some think that developing a successful career is more important than spending time with family and friends while others disagree Discuss both views and give our own opinion 84
- In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount that people can earn.Discuss both views and give your 61
- Environmental problems such as pollution and climate variations are increasing now days The government have taken measures at global level but they got only few solution why is this and how can this problem be solved 78
- In many cities planners have separated schools homes shops and offices into specific areas which are widely separated from each other Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages for city residents 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... buy a tenement in lessee for a certain period of time, which allows people to live without an...
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Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Inother
...r about insurance and home maintenance. inother words to explain, the people living in...
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Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce. inother words to explain, the people living in the home should bear the expen...
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Line 2, column 361, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun wages is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...p them to save money for people getting less wages. There are, however, some disadva...
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Line 2, column 551, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...small room for the entire family, which dont access to the balcony and more faciliti...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ch as saving money and other resources. however it is not free from drawbacks.
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...ch as saving money and other resources. however it is not free from drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89361702128 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5078644973 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.21630763 49.4020404114 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.0 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.6 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228555290709 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101492107911 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626629980284 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170376694445 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406529968616 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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