Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possible, while others think that it should not start until 7 years of age.
Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Some people believe that it is essential for kid if they start learning as earliest as they can while the opponents of this idea think that have formal schooling is better for 7-years-old children. From my point of view, both opinions have its own benefits but the former view seems to more slightly outstanding than the other one.
On the one hand, some people reckon that start learning when children are 7 years old is a better choice. It is believes that children can understand and obtain information more easily and effectively because of the development of their brain during this age. For example, 7-years-old children are able to read and write and that is why they can learn many things they want without language obstacles like the ones in 3 years old.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that parents should let their child begin learning as soon as possible. Some studies found out 3-years-old period is the best time for learning especially in language and art. Firstly, children in this age are interested in exploring the world around so that they can approach information in the best concentration with a variety of ways. Secondly, start learning at an early age can form the ability to think logically which brings lots of benefits for children in their study in the future. A good example for this idea is learning a new language, 3-years-old children can learn a foreign language more quickly and fluently in comparison with adults.
In conclusion, learning at an earliest age possible or having formal education at 7 years old are also have positive and negative impacts on children. However, I believe that children should be educated as soon as they can because of the benefits this method brings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...h adults. In conclusion, learning at an earliest age possible or having formal ...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ormal education at 7 years old are also have positive and negative impacts on childr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89455782313 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58113965519 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.270887067 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.916666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28324365689 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112389812448 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628298511913 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18827283151 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470840079803 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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