Some people think that a law should exist so that young people under 18 cannot be out after the midnight, I just think it should not be. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Nowadays many youngsters prefer to stay late night outside. Some people advice that a law should be made that children below 18 years should not stay after midnight where rest people think that it should not be so, in this essay I will discuss both views and share my opinions at the end.
In today's era, teenagers are more active in smarter than others, they are always keen to learn new things and sometimes curiosity let this happen but there must be a law to protect children from being harmed so A law should be introduced because of plethora of reasons. To begin with, firstly, adolescence is the age when they can be easily manipulated by strangers due to lack of maturity so, it is must that understand pros and cons of staying out. Secondly, masses of crimes have been reported in the last two decades which are happening in midnight eventually makes the environment more deleterious. Lastly, there are myriads of businesses which happens after midnight for instance, drug Supply, hard drink, illegal supply of foods or any other product.
On the other hand, it is elixir that teenager should spend time with their family and siblings and relish the childhood. In spite of spending time with family they can spend time with friends and discuss on new project, homework and studies. Although, for a child proper rest and sleep is must is they will be allowed to stay out after midnight, it will deteriorate their health and aggravate them mentally and physically. But, in some cases it should be allowed like, in the case of medical or family emergency. Moreover, if they are accompanied by an adult.
By concluding this, no Doubt karma everyone has Liberty to go anywhere but in the case of youngsters there should be proper rule to make the more disciplined and better citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, no doubt, in some cases, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81935483871 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4615334087 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8514562724 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338693726532 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102746084297 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138609003207 0.0667982634062 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207662922544 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14685299965 0.056905535591 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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