It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree
From last few decades, many youngsters left homes for better education and successful career but is it a right option to live away from parents and families? So, In this essay, I will share views on the above statement.
in today’s era, it is highly common that masses are living in hostels or as a paying guests because of the plethora of reasons.to begin with, firstly , many living in the outskirts where education and transport facilities are not available so, in that scenario they go to other countries or cities for better opportunities.Secondly, there are some parents who motivate their kids to live separately because it brings sense of maturity and shows real phases of life. In spite of this, children come to know how to manage the expenses hence, it is pivotal to make them understand this. Thirdly, not everyone will able to cope up with this stress whereas, sometimes children may feel deleterious but eventually, it will make them mentally and physically strong. Lastly, building a social circle is quite easier when a person lives alone so, they have more chances to judge each other .
No doubt, living independently teaches myriad of lessons but this is not applicable for every teenager because this is the age where they can be easily influenced by others which will eventually aggravate the situation hence, repercussions of this will be deleterious. So, it is must that parents should guide them at this stage. Although, at home, children can get proper studious environment and marginalize the distractions due to this many prefer to stay at home after colleges. Moreover, parents are the best supports in any kind of obstacle, they stand with you and helps them in taking decisions.
By concluding this, no doubt, parents want that their kids live better life than them but for that youngsters have to live independently and take their own decisions so that they will able to cope up with the stress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, kind of, no doubt, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98461538462 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79124325591 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590769230769 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.416866001 49.4020404114 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.272727273 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5454545455 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3636363636 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243010535722 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898405168385 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845699407676 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173435744089 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04072247194 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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