what should government invest, internet access or public transportation
Nowadays, cities are growing constantly, and there are so many cities in the world which are so vast. Almost all of these cities have internet access but many of them do not have suitable public transportation. These cities are so big that people should commute in them with a car, so I believe that public transportation is in priority and the government should spend money to improve this system immediately. I have this idea for two reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, public transportation brings cleaner weather with itself. If it would be regularly and on time, people will not use their own cars so much. Consequently, less usage of cars means less usage of fuel and cleaner weather, which is an important concern in many big cities in under developing countries. Almost, 2 weeks ago we have experienced very bad weather in my home town, the government had to announced that nobody can use private cars, otherwise, the weather will be so dangerous that everyone should leave the city for a couple of days. Fortunately, by their instance law the danger passed after a few days, it shows that cars have a vital role in every cities' weather.
Second, almost 100 percent of the people in the big cities have internet access, but as I recently read in a newspaper, nearly 45 percent of people in my town do not have private cars. So, improving public transportation definitely helps a big percentage of people in my town. If public transportation will improve, their life would be so easier; besides, they can save so much money, because instead of using taxies, which are so much expensive, they can use buses and trains. As a result, good public transportation has a great positive effect on many people's life.
Third, public transportation let people use their time more effectively. When people are driving in their own cars, they hardly can concentrate on any things else, and they should be focused on their driving. For example, in many days I prefer to use public transportation to go to the work because in buses and trains I have almost 40 minutes that I can use pleasantly, I can read a book or lesson to a podcast, but if I have to go to work with my own car I literally can not do anything but driving.
To sum up, I firmly believe that government should invest its money to improve public transportation, because it has a great effect on the weather condition, and it cause the weather will not be polluted, second, it helps a great percentage of people who do not have their own cars, it lets them commute around the city very easily. And third, it gives us a good time to use it perfectly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, third, for example, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65458422175 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72405396283 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452025586354 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3640010889 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.277777778 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0555555556 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199354874948 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719796846957 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645995174909 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123582610646 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039932276046 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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