the primary goal of education should be to get a job.
Deciding the goal of ones education is not a trivial task. The prompt clearly suggest that the primary goal of education should be to get a job at the end. I somewhat disagree to this suggestion. I think even though job is important in this era getting knowledge should be ones ultimate goal for education for two primary reasons.
someone might argue that education is a key towards success, education makes you smart and basic education education is very important for everyone, However I think knowledge is more important than the education. it is not necessary that one who is educated is the one who has knowledge and vice-versa.
For instance, someone might get a job in the software company because of its education as a computer engineer but afterwords that person requires knowledge to complete daily task as a computer engineer and without that it will become very difficult for that person to carry on with its job.
Another reason is that the job market is volatile. even if you successfully manage to secure a job for yourself, the requirement of that job might change after some amount of time. for example software industry is facing the similar problem. With the new technology emerging software developer ask to shift from the old c++ programming language to new and more powerful python. developers who were doing there enitre work in c++ from couple of decade are now learing new language. that means getting education just to secure a job wont be a good decision.
Finally, knowledge is a passport that will help to go to where ever you want, I think in future companys or employers wont be asking for education anymore. Google nowadays allowing everyone to sit for there interview regardless of there education. because education is not a proper measure for excellence. for example everyone knows bill gate and mark zukerberges were college dropouts. still they manage to build one of the worlds biggest company that will make the world a better place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, so, still, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 335.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91641791045 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63230441044 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525373134328 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.800346206 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38878665895 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12710281621 0.0831039109588 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171037424348 0.0758088955206 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22312553886 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.191830726159 0.0667264976115 287% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.