It is thought by some that it’s better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside
A school of thought believes urban area better place as compared to rural areas. In my opinion, both has its pros and cons, so depending on needs and circumstances, the person has to decide which places is preferable for him to reside.
The cities are advanced in terms of technology, infrastructure and employment, making it preferred location for youth and people working in offices and industries. Undoubtedly, the youth prefers staying here due to schools and universities providing advance teaching methodologies, which the villages cannot; similarly, the job opportunities are more that certainly attracts working community to migrate to cities. In addition to this, the roads and transport system is systematic to ease the city-life. Secondly, the recreational facilities are ample in city; for instance, throwing a party in a restaurant or taking kids to game zone are few examples of enjoying city amenities.
Despite the above benefits the city provides, it definitely does not mean that rural area is dull or boring place to dwell, owing to the fact that village provide natural scenic beauty and pure environment, which the cities cannot provide. The life is cities has some drawbacks such as over-crowding and pollution emitted by vehicles; whereas, the rural-life is peaceful and pollution free, giving ample space to people. Admittedly, such surroundings is best for health and, therefore, many elderly people prefer staying here, where they find themselves happy in lap of nature.
To sum up, I pen down saying that its personal choice to decide which place is better to live the life. I would say, youth and working age should prefer cities, while the senior citizens should stay in environment friendly habitat of village.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29390681004 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86451469391 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652329749104 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4629739565 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.272727273 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4545454545 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182866959306 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689311033067 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691442558595 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102996698117 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264324247614 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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