Although some people think that successful athletes must have inborn talent to get high achievement, others believe
that no one can accomplish with nurture hardworking and continuous practice. I think with these both two factors can a man race to the top pf the accomplishment.
On the one hand, some people are born with talents and aptitude in genes on some specific area in sport, for example, Lin Dan, who was the champion in the last Olympic game in badminton, is said to be the most talented star in badminton in China. It is for sure that with talent, one can achieve easier comparing those who is not.
In other world, people believe that with continuous daily practice, even talent can not last for long. It is important for sportsman having strong physical quality to compete with others, which is definitely rely on long term self decipline diet and dedicated practice. only with individual commitment and dedication can one develop his or her talent thoroughly in competition so that to win. Again take Lin Dan as an example, according to his coach, the talented boy practiced 8 hours prepay without taking a break for years. Only by his flawless techniques and strong physical quality, can he become the first man in badminton history.
In conclusion, no one succeeds for no reason. Only the best combination of natural talent and nurture hardworking can one athlete become successful and world-wide famous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69427478408 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615062761506 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6322032285 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.636363636 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135802742437 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573161870427 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490919387809 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092402285963 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422679789334 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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