Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is undoubtedly true that currently some people opine that societies are being provided by various options in their life. I completely agree with this opinion because the effect of increasing people education level and dramatic development on technology and information.
The first reason regarding this issue is the increasing proportion of well-educated people throughout years. This phenomenon directly impacts on discoveries, that are significantly risen by years, that related with the problems faced by societies. Furthermore, those high level educated people also make innovation as options for tremendously improving people’s quality of life. For instance, in health and medicine field, years ago, people were suffering diseases related with their inner organs like digestive-related organs will be treated by surgery cure their illness. However, researchers provided various novel options that are less invasive and could be recover promptly and people could consider the best options for their selves. Thus, increasing percentage of people with further studies directly impact on people options to solve their problems.
The other reasons related with this occurrence is the advancement of information and technology, especially since internet discovered. This occurrence dramatically impact on the access of information which could be easily accessed via personal gadget and quickly going viral. The indication of this occurrence could be found by the evolvement of people getting information or knowledge. Previously, people faced problem in their study will go to library to find out reference literatures or ask to their teachers or professor but nowadays, the students could be easily type their problems on gadgets and found the literatures limitless with various pinions from experts. Hence, improvement on technology and information affect on people options.
On conclusion, I fully agree that people have many options for problem solving on their daily life that influenced by increasing number of high degree people education and technology and information that are significantly advanced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 721, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...provement on technology and information affect on people options. On conclusion, I f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, regarding, so, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86495176849 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98346889218 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549839228296 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1659440084 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.285714286 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15646573937 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067827673674 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328702681152 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117179800121 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234614059223 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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