Action movies with spectacular car chases are very popular with young people.It is often said that these sorts of movies lead to increase in car accidents among young drivers as they try to copy what they have seen in films.Do you agree that such movies increase the amount of bad driving.What can b done to encourage young people to drive more safely?
Nowadays young folks are much fascinated by watching action packed films specially the ones which include fast cars and bikes. it is believed by some people, that these become the cause of accidents as youngsters try to imitate the dangerous stunts by themselves. I completely accord with this, as such kind of movies influence youth in a negative way thereby impacting their driving skills.
To embark on, the trend of driving fast automobiles among the youngsters is gaining pace. As they are passionate about driving, they try to copy the stunts from the famous action movies in their life to feel the rush. For them it is just a game and they are hardly aware of the consequences of carrying out this act. Furthermore, they are under the impression that doing these stunts in public would make them look cool just like their favourite actors in the movie. the young drivers are usually not aware that several difficult stunts, that look quite easy on-screen, have great risks and are performed under the supervision of professional stuntmen and in several takes.
As these incidents are increasing day by day, we should take several steps to ensure that youngsters drive safely. First and foremost, all action films should display a statutory warning about the stunts being performed. A video message from the actors themselves would be further impactful in conveying the message. Additionally, there should be an awareness among them about the dangers and risks of rash driving by citing some examples from the past accidents and how it affected the victim's life. they should also be taught that the careless driving can prove fatal for them as well as others who are driving on the road. Government can also impose heavy fines, followed by cancellation of driving license, for violating traffic laws.
To conclude with, youngsters love adventures and are easily swayed away by the stunts in the films however, it its crucial to learn the difference in real and reel life, so that any mishappening could be avoided in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04411764706 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52724941772 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582352941176 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6358497886 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195646327402 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583460730847 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514999625153 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115023823693 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715865097335 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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