The advent of the internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working arrangement has more advantages to disadvantages? Share personal examples in your essay.
The technological inventions such as internet and laptop computers has brought a drmatic change in workstyle of many employees. it has provided the flexibility connect to the official work directly from home. some people would argue about the demerits of this sort of working trends, however I believe that it offers more benefits instead of drawbacks.
With the expansion of internet, more number of organizations have started to provide this convenience to their employees. The flexibility to work from home has innumerable advantages and is now being considered as one of the important facility an organization can extend. it provides a great work life balance and employees can manage their office and household work simultaneously. Furthermore, it allows several workers to save their precious time they spent while commuting to offices, resulting in improved productivity. A recent survey has proved that working remotely has helped many women employees, who wanted to quit their job due to the resposibility of their family.
Although, remote connect arrangement provides a number of benefits, there are certain drawbacks as well. some people find working from home quite monotonous and boring. they feel more productive when working in the right environment. Additionally, employees are required to make arrangements such as high speed internet connectivity and convinient place at home to work hassle free. being away from office for longer duration can make them loose their interest in their work as they will not be able to connect with other colleagues and feel the freshness they get at workplace.
Stating my personal experience, work from home has been of a great help whenever I travel to hometown for longer duration. it let me spend some additional time with my family while remain connected with my office work as well. however, excess of connecting remotely makes me feel disconnected from my daily routine and office affairs.
In conclusion, home based working offers a great deal of comfort to the workers and in my personal opinion this policy should be adopted by more organizations in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36390532544 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90307249443 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565088757396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5987379013 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.647058824 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300075132416 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10751831821 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604007540681 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176414264071 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355069855876 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.