You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
say where you think you left the papers
explain why they are so important
tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Madam
I’m writing to inform you about my last meeting at your hotel. In this morning, when I was in the meeting with my colleague i had to be left early. Therefore when I got home, I noticed my papers still in the hotel.
As you know it, we hold the private room for our meeting. And the papers should be still in same places. This papers which I forgot is about our last program for children. It’s a sort of survey. We have been working on this project almost 2 years. We can’t do second survey due of the deadline.
Therefore, if you are available for the helping me about my problem please send me the this notes. Moreover, you should send me this notes with fast delivery. On behalf, I’m available for paying to cost.Don’t be hesitate about this issue.
I’m waiting for answer and notes.
Yours faithfully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I was in the meeting with my colleague i had to be left early. Therefore when I ...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...th my colleague i had to be left early. Therefore when I got home, I noticed my papers st...
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Line 13, column 84, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...ping me about my problem please send me the this notes. Moreover, you should send me thi...
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Line 13, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Don&apos
..., I'm available for paying to cost.Don't be hesitate about this issue. I&...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, sort of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75496688742 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48821616492 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622516556291 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7274220774 44.8134815571 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.2307692308 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6153846154 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203729964373 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689816031989 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07957318032 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118441862761 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112137681709 0.0580467560999 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.09 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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