face-to-face contact
It is true that nowadays there is a significant growth in communication through social
media instead of face to face contact in people's lives. While this trend is conducive
to several positive outcomes, I would maintain that it is overall a negative
development.
On the one hand, there are several merits of using social networking sites to
communicating. It must be recognised that this helps people maintain relationships
that would otherwise be lost by relocation or business. For example, Facebook and
Twitter are allowed people to post their pictures or personal changes. This enables
sliver surfer to update information about their friends despite long distance. Another
advantage is that those who have psychological problems such as lack self-
confidence in the face - to - face meetings could facilitate to express their feeling and
thinking.
On the other hand, I believe that such merits are negated by the following
drawbacks. Firstly, those who became over-reliant on social networking sites are
likely to lack interest in having face-to-face communication. In fact, they prefer
solving issues connected with personal life or work using social messaging system
by emojis and smileys rather than meeting in person. As a consequence, people
experience problems with understanding real emotions in professional relationship.
In addition to this, people are likely to be victims of scammers when being made
friends with strangers. For instance, people could not control a false indentity who
could be tricked them about personal information. This could be rendered users lost
money.
In conclusion, I consider that the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the
advantages, and the ability to articulate thoughts and emotions to others face-to-face
may soon be lost altogether.
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| 2020-01-08 | Lê Thị Hà | 61 | view |
| 2019-12-14 | Ahmed karem Mahmoud Ahmed | 78 | view |
| 2019-12-14 | Ahmed karem Mahmoud Ahmed | 78 | view |
| 2019-12-11 | kamalcalc1977 | 89 | view |
| 2019-12-11 | kamalcalc1977 | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: May
...s and emotions to others face-to-face may soon be lost altogether.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75636363636 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05703067312 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5103737828 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.533333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259984298233 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082354404921 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140473756999 0.0667982634062 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743087185297 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158453714458 0.056905535591 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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