Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today, technology is part of everyday life, we are surrounded by it, and cannot live without it. We can find new innovations in every field of our life. Internet is one of the wonderful miracle of new technology. Number of internet users is increasing day by day. It is a fact that in the past few years internet has exploded in terms of size, amount of information, and in accessibility. For some people access to so much information from the internet creating problems. However, in my opinion, the internet is providing a lot of valuable information which is beneficial for everyone.
First of all, school and college students are achieving good grades by utilizing the valuable information provided on the internet about almost all academic subjects. Students can get the most updated information on the internet without wasting their time. For example, when I was in college and if i need to find information for some assignment or homework I had to go to the public library, needed to find different books related to the topic, and read them to find one of the most relevant and valuable information, but now my nephew who is in college can get the same information by surfing different websites on the internet from the comfort of his home. A lot of information from different websites for the same topic is not creating confusion in students because when they enter the search string on the internet it searches the most relevant and right data and present them to the users with the results in the order of most important to the least valuable.
Furthermore, access of more and more people to internet is attracting a lot companies to reach hundreds of customers by providing their information on the internet. This in turn encouraging advertisers, marketers content makers, newsmakers to adopt the same strategies. Therefore, all the information is now available on the internet and people are gaining the benefits of this information. The usage of internet encompasses day-to-day life with a news examples being shopping, weather, news, live webcast and much more.
Finally, housewives are also gaining benefits from a valuable information from the internet. They have access to get information from home remedies, fashion, food recipes, benefits of fruits, vegetables and other ingredients,and what not. For example, the other day my mom wanted to cook chinese food. She didn’t know the recipe , but she was not worried. Just before started cooking she opened up a laptop and search for the remedy. She chose one of the popular and updated recipes and started to cook. As you can see that valuable information provided on the internet today is making everyone's life easier.
In conclusion, sometimes a lot of information available on the internet about the same topic is counter-productive for some people. However, I think a lot of information available on the internet is a blessing for most people. Most companies, students, housewives, and many more are gaining benefits from this information easily through the internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... technology. Number of internet users is increasing day by day. It is a fact that...
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... day. It is a fact that in the past few years internet has exploded in terms of size,...
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...r example, when I was in college and if i need to find information for some assig...
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...ifferent books related to the topic, and read them to find one of the most releva...
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...information, but now my nephew who is in college can get the same information by ...
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...ic is not creating confusion in students because when they enter the search strin...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...ternet encompasses day-to-day life with a news examples being shopping, weather, news,...
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Suggestion: , and
...fruits, vegetables and other ingredients,and what not. For example, the other day m...
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...ts, vegetables and other ingredients,and what not. For example, the other day my ...
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...se food. She didn't know the recipe , but she was not worried. Just before st...
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...remedy. She chose one of the popular and updated recipes and started to cook. As ...
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...uctive for some people. However, I think a lot of information available on the in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2563.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 502.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10557768924 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94185020809 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466135458167 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 812.7 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.3061446458 48.9658058833 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.52 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.08 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263300938039 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798658396167 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808011867795 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157175599772 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485480226859 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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