The author concludes that the best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things. I agree with the author that most of the people who achieve big in life have a passionate interest and come from commonplace things. My further examples of support the issue are given below.
Firstly, Bill Gates one of the richest man in the world and the founder of Microsoft. Bill Gates gets his ideas to arise from commonplace things. He started to build system software and application software in the garage of his own home but now Microsoft is the most opulent company in the world. While building phase of the software they have to overcome with lots of complication and bugs but there passion and determination help to achieve the things that he is today.
Secondly, Jeff Bezos is the currently richest man in the world and the founder of Amazon.com. While working for one other company for 5 years. One day, while wandering at the home, he thought of building eCommerce websites. After that, he began to work building eCommerce websites named as Amazon.com. The company started in the one-room. Now becomes one of the most valuable and opulent companies in the world. Amazon.com provide service all over the world and it has branches around 100 countries and will increase its branches soon in remaining countries. Not the eCommerce site, that also launches the online movie watching websites named as "Amazon Prime video" and online book reading sites named as "Amazon Ebook".
In the conclusion, all the best ideas arise from a passionate interset in commonplace things. There will lots of complexity while building that ideas with reality but the passion drives them crazy and they will achieve them in the future.
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- Claim: Any piece of information referred to as a fact should be mistrusted, since it may well be proven false in the future.Reason: Much of the information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate. 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 290.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06551724138 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65160754867 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496551724138 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4701504396 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4117647059 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135930390193 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566467542602 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828929926252 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114750562955 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830436551869 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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