Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion on this? Do you think this is a good or bad change?
Recently, the phenomenon of replacing large shopping malls and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that matters of the window shopping are highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that new shopping methods can be a plus, and I will investigate that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, small shopping centers can provide the society with noticeable effects, that are rooted in the fact that merits, as well as advantages of shopping infrastructures, are crucial. According to my own experience, I performed an academic experiment that discovered the importance of consumer services. Thus, beneficial ramifications of replacing small stores are visible.
From a scientific point of view, the shop replacement can provide the community with negative impacts that are related to the reality that demerits of shopping tendencies are remarkable. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university described online shopping. Hence, predicted outcomes of local supermarkets are noticeable.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of shopping malls far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of replacing old shops prove the significance of promoting shopping, but also pinpoint possible implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82727272727 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26355722872 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659090909091 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6405293372 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.545454545 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194856413756 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648871052107 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493751090059 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106944034745 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349052969082 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 11.5310837438 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.8 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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