Stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What do you think the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, society is suffering from sicknesses due to stress. This essay will discuss two main reasons for stress such as longer
working hours on the jobs and poor life-style habits and suggest solutions to these causes including managing work-life and disciplined lifestyle to get rid-off from stress.
The main causes of stress-related illnesses are staying long on jobs and poor management of lifestyle. This is happening because of the fast pace of life and trying to compete with each other in this competitive work scenario so that people hardly discipline in their life. for example, the work environment was more convenient than the present. more and more people running towards jobs to fulfill their lifestyle and status in society. As a result, some time they have to work more on the top of their regular hours that leads to stress and society suffer from
sicknesses due to this.
This essay suggests some of the solutions that can help to solve these problems are maintaining a bridge between work and personal life, strong discipline toward life. If we do not implement such ways to getting improve life than we get stuck in a job as well as ruin our discipline for life-time. Here we can strict with the discipline and follow all plans. For example, we can do some activities like yoga, meditation and gym. These can improve our physical and mental state of mind.
In conclusion, however, life is so hectic due to work and lifestyle we are following, this can alternate by obeying the strict plan or good combination between work and personal life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97735849057 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58778245097 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543396226415 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.801325095 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.461538462 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140031239669 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568669702383 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043442211532 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791937741827 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178530315098 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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