You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles (64 kilometers) away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would choose. Give specific reasons for your choice.
Travelling is an integral part of everyone's life. There modes of transportation depending upon the distance and time involved. For a distance of 40 miles, possible modes of transportation are train, bus, and personal car. The latter two modes are via road network while train services involve a complex and wide rail network. For commuting a distance of 40 miles, I would prefer personal car as it provides comfort and flexibility with minimum journey time.
Travelling by train is also a viable option for 64 kilometers. Rail services are generally economical and are an integral lifeline for pe...
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bus service provide a frequent, low cost mode
bus services provide a frequent, low cost mode
Although there are numbers of modes of transportation like bus and train (both public and private) for travelling a distance of 40 miles, but I would prefer
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