Write a letter to translation agency about the report to be translated urgently.In your letter, you should:•explain the content of letter•why you need translated report•why do you need it urgently.

Hi John

I have an urgent translation request that need you help, the deadline is tonight.

We, Sun&water corp, just finished a vital report and we prepared that for the international trade fair, submitting time is the day after tomorrow. Unfortunately, One of our team members who understand Chinese got fever this morning so there is no one be able to do that for us.

Here is the task of the translation. The content is about how to transfer energy of the sun to the power station that can be saved. The request is translated it from English to Chinese, even the notice is relatively short but you company have done fabolous job numerous times so I understand that you and your absolutely unbelievable team would have chance to help us.

I will attatched the document with this mail and please give me a call if you have any question about the job.

Thank you in advance.

Kind regards,
Joe

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7125 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63581107062 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69375 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6090177481 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7777777778 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209083531334 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075088429172 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641871567421 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125125455392 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601415514196 0.0580467560999 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.