Write a letter to the local planning committee. A new swimming pool is about to be built in your town, the local planning committee wants all residents to let them know where to place the pool - in the centre of town or just outside the town. Write a letter describing
• the importance of the pool
• the location you prefer and why
• Explain why the other location isn’t suitable.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am an inhabitant of Valencia City. Last day, while reading the newspaper, my eyes captured an article about the proposal to construct new swimming pool in my town as well as we are highly privileged to provide the right opinion.
Our town is well equipped with facilities for different activities but it lacks a swimming pool. The people utilize the river flowing through our city for swimming. However, during rainy seasons swimming in the river becomes challenging and risky. To overcome the burden, building a swimming pool is essential.
The finest location for the swimming pool construction is the empty space located adjacent to the indoor stadium located in our town. As a swimming enthusiast I recommend this place in view of the fact that, an indoor swimming pool can be built by modifying the indoor sports area which provides ample space and privacy irrespective of the age and gender. Moreover, the construction will be economical and feasible.
There are plenty of locations available, still the above mentioned areas is the best suited since the other locations are saturated with apartments, shops, vehicles and ongoing constructions which could cause disturbances for the people.
Hence, it is my pleasure to provide the right suggestions for the new swimming pool.
Yours faithfully,
Sd-/
Name.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 270, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ol can be built by modifying the indoor sports area which provides ample space and pri...
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Line 25, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ew swimming pool. Yours faithfully, Sd-/ Name.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40465116279 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7869897848 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618604651163 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.9037597983 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183556415347 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669729771513 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534979660115 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980575694864 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506132236769 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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