Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to pay your attention which is the lack of ample bus service caused Milford district inconvenience so I hope you can imporve it positively for all the residents around here.
The major problem of operational bus-time services are not punctual over the last two weeks. Due to peak time in working day, I have to wait more that 45 minutes to catch the bus and people are overcrowed in the queue after long waiting. As a consequence, I hardly get on the first one bus so to be last to reach the office happened several time on me. Apart from that, bus driver passed by the stop without seeing us to wave it, which I believed there are some visibility problems caused him or her recklessness.
Irregularities schedule of the bus service bothers me a lot so recovery scheme can be delivered from your side. Firstly, more bus services need to opearte in this area, rearrange the schedule to meet the peak time requrement is another operation. Secondly, a stop light could be installed for waiting people to indicate bus drivers while approaching the bus stop.
Thank you for you in advance and I look forward to hearing form you.
Kind regards,
Joe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68396226415 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60409401228 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665094339623 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3265038747 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229171058198 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855608646081 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748588621449 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112393620257 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820821155487 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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