It is a faulty consideration for few people giving high value gifts for their kids. Others hold different argument. I tend to agree that send valuable presents for child is an excellent idea and will share my opinion.
Admittedly, it is unsuitable for most family to afford expensive gifts frequently, especially amount of the festival around us. While people ought to understand the each penny worth money means expensive present along with quality guarantee, also contains wide range of wisdom design, which children are able to play or use it lasting for long period. Child would realise how the gift itself can be treated as his or her best belongings even friends. In another words, spending amount of money on the gift will teach him or her to make effort on work not only for living but also for sharing. When I was young, my parents bought a computer for me as a graduated gift. One of the reasons this one pricelss for me is they side even cost them a lot but being familiar with new technology can help me cope the complex future. I used that computer more than 10 years and gain countless knowledge on it with my unstopped computer skill improvement. The gift that my parents give it makes me become a better man.
Another reason related to the topic is that child would have less time on selection and ample time on concertration. Nowadays, to waste numerous time on plenty of choice causing people dissatisfaction. Focusing on one task is being the method to solve the trends in contemporary society, resulting he or her is williing to find meaning in the life, also help to meet their lifetime hobbie or job.
In conclusion, I agree it is a great idea to give expensive gift for child because that is the positive affect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding festival'?
Suggestion: the surrounding festival
... gifts frequently, especially amount of the festival around us. While people ought to understand the e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68403908795 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56910970413 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612377850163 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7659106709 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119105809061 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421994655259 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406561668932 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839408345897 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358942263623 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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