You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is often believed that participating in sports playing in teams is better than individual sports. Others think that individual sports are more valuable than team sports. In this essay both statements will be considered, however, in my opinion, individual sports like box and karate outweigh, because people, who do this sport may control their result and everything depends on their efforts.
Playing in teams develop cooperation, respect and strong friendship. In other words, the team sports promote teamwork. Football, for instance, is a strategic sport game, which makes the team members act as one organism. The team members are like family, because they communicate with each other very tightly and care about their teammates. Nevertheless, each mistake of the team member reflects to the common score, and possibility of losing game is higher.
Individual sports are beneficial, in my opinion, because sportsman rely on themselves. Firstly, they might train more whenever they want and get their championship. For example, Gena Golovkin is one of the best boxers in the world according to the American National Sport Association, who win all championships. Secondly, they do not depend on other people. Moreover, they are absolutely independent in their scores. Eventually, all individuals’ efforts will pay off, if they do their best.
To conclude, taking part in team sport is much better according to the opinion of some people, because their result is common. Others believe that individuals have more benefits, because they act independently. I think that participating in individual sport is more advantageous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 497, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52173913043 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98235946282 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577075098814 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 283.868780488 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5893585005 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1764705882 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8823529412 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 5.23603664747 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 3.70975609756 350% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207680073779 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765852566556 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659857318289 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142925137545 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742616023207 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.14 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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