University experience is more important than a university’s degree. Some people argue that university life is much more important than an educational degree in job market. Do you agree or not agree?
Recently, the phenomenon of the university experience and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated
debate. Although contested by many that the matter of complex procedures is highly
beneficial, such an issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and consequently
positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that university life can be a
plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a general standpoint, a university graduate can provide the society with some noticeable effects
which are rooted in the fact that crucial issues, as well as ultimate outcomes, are
inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university
student, I performed an academic experiment that discovered current policies. Thus,
beneficial ramifications of both this common phenomenon and accordingly complicated
procedures apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of a public arena, an educational degree might increase the consequences of critical
needs. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious
university has asserted that the downside of creative processes is correlated negatively
with vital issues. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of this
remarkable phenomenon.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly
believe that the benefits of college experience far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages
of this unique phenomenon prove the significance of total outcomes, but also pinpoint
thorny issues’ potential implications
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Suggestion: Believe
...arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of college experience...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, apparently, but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9746835443 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31614969439 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675105485232 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6134773869 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.12807881773 484% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166135280538 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578942220169 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415147350789 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0395133969047 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042488806218 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 53.1260098522 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 11.5310837438 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.01 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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