Some people think that competitive sports should be included as a subject in school, while others believe that it has negative effect on children. Discuss both the view and give your opinio
Contesting against other people helps to gather individuals who belong to different cultures and countries. While, some say that sports could leads to clashes and increases disputation among citizens of nations. this essay agrees that in order to bring persons affiliated to diverse ethnicities, sports could be used as a medium to assist everyone to understand each other. furthermore, this essay first outlines the necessity of any physical game promoting teamwork explained with an example, further elaborated with the analysis on clashes among teams which maximizes hate and issues.
Firstly, teamwork is a result of any game being played. it has been observed players find it very important to have players who could bring innovation and new strategies into the match so that there could be more chance of winning. For instance, in 2015, the University of Arizona welcomed more than 50% of students who belong to Mexico, UAE and South Asia into their football team to increase the innovation and promote new techniques. The new method resulted in helping them to win 70% games played outside the state.
furthermore, disagreements are always part of any sports activity. it often leads to hate speech as most of the conflicts end up having rude conversations because of different interpretations of each individual. For example, the clash occurred when cricket Umpire gave out to an Indian player in a T20 World Cup, 2007 and led to physical harm to many players of Pakistan and India. however, this could have easily dealt with strict rules and regulations by International cricket Council.
To conclude, joint efforts and partnerships never go in vain and supports modification of strategies. however, opposition drives to hate speech which could be avoided by proper rules by senior authorities. The essay totally agrees to promoting sports as a medium to bring in more and more people at one platform.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25242718447 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80000179542 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608414239482 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7193036478 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.2 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0801959758665 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298082115648 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334370532152 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0492147743052 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354185948463 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.