Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, it is becoming a trend that people like to shop online from different website available on Internet, such as, Amazon, which is one of the famous e-commerce site in the U.S. and many other countries. This essay will argue that the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks. This essay will first outline some advantages and explain why there are more advantages of online shopping and buying things on the Internet and then present a disadvantage as why Internet is encouraging people to buy more by showing attractive pictures and using good marketing techniques and strategies.
Some people think that buying things online such as flight tickets or train tickets, academic books or novels and even grocery would help them to save time. It has been seen that people now live in nuclear families; hence, they do not get time to go for grocery shopping as both of the partners, particularly husband and wife, work at different locations. So, getting grocery to cook on time is a big relief for them. For example, the number of working women is being increased. We have seen in past that women used to go for grocery shopping as she used to be one who used to cook. But, as the number is rising, women tend to look for online options to get grocery at home by saving time and energy.
Other than that, online shopping gives many options to buy items, such as, books. Buying a book online has made life easier as one can find even a used book at a lesser price. Due to cash on delivery option, one does not even has to go to anyone's doorstep or to a shop to buy a book. For example, while I was in the U.S. on my exchange program, I was totally new in the city and did not know much about the city. Someone told me about Craiglist.com and asked me to buy used books from there. I put an ad and within 2 days, Mr. John contacted me and gave an option to deliver the book free of cost. It was a perfect option for me as I had to pay half a price. On the other hand, it is not necessary that people show the true picture of their products or services they are offering online. But, in most of the cases, the e-commerce takes this matter seriously and carefully verifies these sellers. For instance, on AliBaba.com, each and every seller has to be verified and give true and honest pictures their products. Moreover, after each sale, usually buyers give reviews to sellers and the product they buy. Also, there are tons of platform on Social Media where one can write about any problem they face while buying online.
To conclude, online shopping is a great innovation for people who work full-time. It saves time and cost at the same time. Even getting things on your doorstep make life easier. While, the drawback of not meeting the buyer and not seeing the original products mat create some problem. Hence, most of the times, online shopping is a smooth experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ying a book online has made life easier as one can find even a used book at a less...
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Line 9, column 227, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...h on delivery option, one does not even has to go to anyones doorstep or to a shop ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, moreover, so, then, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 520.0 315.596192385 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55576923077 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35334333493 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505769230769 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 750.6 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6837009924 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1153846154 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207206280493 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520819307806 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494637811703 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127364341875 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715890079791 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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