Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, it is becoming a trend that people like to shop online. This essay will argue that the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks. This essay will first outline advantages of an online shopping then present a disadvantage.
Some people think that buying things online such as tickets, books or novels and even grocery would help them to save time. People now live in nuclear families; hence, they do not get time to go for grocery shopping as both of the partners, particularly husband and wife, work. For example, the number of working women is increasing, so they look for option that can save their time.
Other than that, online shopping gives many options to buy items. Buying a book online has made life easier as one can find even a used book at a lesser price. For example, a new person can easily find a book in a new city rather than finding a book store.
On the other hand, people get shocked while receiving wrong or bad-quality product. But, in most of the cases, the e-commerce takes this matter seriously and carefully verifies these sellers. For instance, on AliBaba.com, each and every seller has to be verified and reviewed.
To conclude, online shopping is a great innovation for people who work full-time. It saves time and cost at the same time. Hence, most of the times, online shopping is a smooth experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...amous e-commerce site in many countries.This essay will argue that the advantages of...
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Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ying a book online has made life easier as one can find even a used book at a less...
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Line 9, column 227, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...h on delivery option, one does not even has to go to anyones doorstep or to a shop ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, moreover, so, then, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74752475248 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50027324259 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537128712871 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6684665574 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209774577775 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539895276092 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561832232507 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124335883034 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691413451079 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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