Dear John and Jane,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am just writing to thank you both for the holiday and for the photos you sent.
The photos arrived this morning in the post. They reminded me what a great time i had during my stay with you last month. You really were fantastic hosts, and i could't asked for better guides to show me around.
Sorry i did not write you earlier, but i have been working flat out since the moment i arrived home. Do you remember i told you i have an assignment to finish? Well, the deadline was two weeks earlier that i think it was.
Anyway, i am back to normal now and i have been handed all of my assignment. In fact, now that i am free why don't you come both and stay? There is a spare room here and you are welcome to use it whenever you like.
Hope to see you son,
Patrick
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ost. They reminded me what a great time i had during my stay with you last month....
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...tter guides to show me around. Sorry i did not write you earlier, but i have b...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... been working flat out since the moment i arrived home. Do you remember i told yo...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... moment i arrived home. Do you remember i told you i have an assignment to finish...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the deadline was two weeks earlier that i think it was. Anyway, i am back to n...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...earlier that i think it was. Anyway, i am back to normal now and i have been h...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...all of my assignment. In fact, now that i am free why dont you come both and stay...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...gnment. In fact, now that i am free why dont you come both and stay? There is a spar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, really, so, well, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 670.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.08536585366 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.95935802717 2.54303337028 77% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65243902439 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.6279360102 44.8134815571 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.8333333333 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424333363085 0.216113520407 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149047228683 0.0766984524023 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118243956429 0.0603063233224 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23780802984 0.12726935374 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122126799876 0.0580467560999 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 70.7449484536 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 7.45979381443 48% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.85 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.01 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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