You visited a town last month and told your friend that you would like to meet. However, you could not make it. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should:
Express your apology.
Why you could not meet?
Making an arrangement to meet him.
Dear Rita,
I hope you and your family had a great time in the city last month and the fact that we didn't meet wasn't significant for you. I know, how long you had been waiting for my visit and I am really sorry about that but I do have a paramount reason for my absence. My older sister, whom I was at her place in the city, gave birth to her son that day and I had to be with her all day and support as only possible in the hospital. It's so incredible I'm an aunt now. Nevertheless, I am still here in the town, absolutely free and ready to visit you again. What do you think about next Sunday? We would able to attend a new exposition in the Public Art Gallery and then go for a meal to an oriental restaurant. I am sure we will have the time of our life. Let me know what you feel about my ideas.
I am waiting for your answer.
Best regards,
Sarah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...he city last month and the fact that we didnt meet wasnt significant for you. I know,...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...t month and the fact that we didnt meet wasnt significant for you. I know, how long y...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...city, gave birth to her son that day and I had to be with her all day and support...
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Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ible in the hospital. Its so incredible Im an aunt now. Nevertheless, I am still ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, really, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.97126436782 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1485338369 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9182803264 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8181818182 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227137726881 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826971209596 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830175252421 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166008834995 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566584160881 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.45 8.71597938144 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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