You have a problem with the computer in the office which has affected your work. Write a letter to your manager and say
What problem do you have?
What difficulties does this create for you?
What could be done about it?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to take into your kind consideration that my laptop is having a couple of problems which need to be resolved immediately.
As you are aware that I have been given a new laptop for my office work last month. However, the system has an issue with a hard drive as it has a merely 16 GB storage capacity whereas, I need a minimum of 64 GB space to download the dossiers of the new employees who got the client’s approval, and send their documents to the mobilization team to start the visa process. Due to the shortage of hard drive of my system, I couldn’t able to copy and send the documents of the pending cases, as a result, they start date would be a delay to complete the project on time. In addition to that, it seems that the laptop has a connectivity issue to the main server as it didn’t allow me to enter the timesheet. I doubt that It if continues, I won't get pay at the end of the month as its compulsory for all the employees to submit their attendance visa system.
Considering the above-mentioned problems, I would suggest if you could provide your approval to the IT department to upgrade my hard drive, so I could proceed with the pending without any further delay. Also, it would be much appreciated if you could shout an email to the head office personnel to access my laptop and check out its connectivity with the sever to enter my web time.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 98, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...t if you could provide your approval to the IT department to upgrade my hard drive, so...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, whereas, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53136531365 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71048218746 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 374.4 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4956049725 44.8134815571 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.444444444 76.5299724578 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1111111111 16.8248392259 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215302551263 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824812523956 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812249934503 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145032447987 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616630551202 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.