Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money
could be better spent . To what extent do you agree with this view?
The government funding for the arts has evolved as a major topic of concern in modern
society. While some belive this phenomenon just brings some drawbacks, I’m of the opinion
that there are real benefits of this policy.
There is a common belief that investing on artists is a waste of financial resources. People
may argue that instead of the arts, the health care system is more desired for receiving
governmental finance. A budget could contribute on reconstruct many old hospitals as well
as a extremely modern medical facilities. By investing, the health care system might
develops boomingly to protect people from dangerous diseases such as HIV-AIDS, marina,
cancer. In addition, there are a range of prior issues organising free classes for both children
and adults could helps to decline the number of uneducated person.
However, I am convinced that this type of governmental spending is helpful. This is because
it would allow people from all walks of society have opportunities to access the arts. The
arts, however, is always regarded as a luxury entertainment. Without the investment for
artists, people want to enjoy any kinds of the performing arts such as music concepts,
exhibitions, people have to spend money on tickets. Moreover, free art subjects based on
governmental finance enrich people’s aesthetics. A clear example of this case is that
through some fashion class, people could find out clothing style would suit with their body
and the way of mix clothes perfectly.
To conclude, through the idea of giving support on the arts is a waste in the view of some
people, I firmly believe that this policy is worthwhile for people in today society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28623188406 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74802061624 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8067374803 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.214285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245066591045 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741282156032 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626414194922 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648408978114 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05692729919 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.