In many countries today there is insufficient respect to old people. What are the reasons? What problems might it bring to the society.
Senior citizens are the back bone of every society. Therefore, there is no doubt that elder people should get respect in society. But, this is not present scenario. In contrast with the past, old people are treated very rudely, almost in every country. This essay will discuss that why it is happening and the issues that may occur in society.
To embark with, the major reason is career aspiration. Nowadays, young generations are career oriented. That means people are spending more and more time towards achieving goals, where all are closely involved with jobs, study and business. Moreover, these people are required to travel out of city or country for work, which make one's life unhealthy enough for this generation. Secondly, today people think elder people are back dated because the gap between the young one's and old people makes a poor interactions. As, they think that elder masses thinking is not modern.
Moving forth, society is encountering many issues due to our negligence towards elder members of our society. Primarily, due to insufficient respect and lack of attention, many of the folks are losing family bonding. Joint families are being separated into the nuclear family. In addition to that, our next generations are not getting the love from grandparents thus, children are losing love and affections. Furthermore, society will not able to learn culture and customs due to not spending a quality time with grandparents.
So, the conclusion of this essay, is that, we should pay attention towards elder members of our society, as they plays a crucial role in child development. In every family respect is given to senior citizens due to their contribution and unconditional support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in contrast, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17921146953 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60983097896 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.381084829 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2777777778 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118263878349 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350842860744 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035833934351 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682218409337 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202225422618 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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