Nowadays children watch too much TV.
Why is this happening, and what can be done to prevent it?
Nowadays, watching TV among children change to the most popular entertainments. There are variety reasons for it, and also several solution for reducing this attitude. This essay intend to survey both above issues.
About the reasons of watching TV via children researcher mentioned to two of the most important cases. First of all, it is the most attractive visual medium compared to other media. For example, the programs like dance show, fun series, educational and kid programs persuade children which spend a lot of their time in front of screen whilst, other media have not such set together. Secondly, accessing to the TV is very easier than any other things. These days, there is a TV set in each home and therefore, children without any bother can spend leisure time with it just by tapping a key. Consequently, they do not any effort for finding new activities in order to the replace with it.
However, there are some solution for reducing child interested in watching TV. At first, the parents should educated to the children which excess of watching TV will have the detrimental effects on their health specially their sight. For instance, recent research shows that, one of the most important reasons of weak sighting is excessive watching on the TV screen. Furthermore, the government also, should provide recreational centers like amusement parks and sport stadiums for children that they can spend leisure time in these places rather than watching TV screen.
In summarize, we should accept this fact which, in spite of the whole negative affects, children spend more time of their leisure in front of screen nonetheless, both parent and government can do actions to prevent it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'several solutions'.
Suggestion: several solutions
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11071428571 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58041831366 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4769166299 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.214285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198275831094 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756992944081 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474033229544 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131606837924 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230698258274 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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