Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing in response to the advertisement posted in Times Magazine last Sunday. I believe that the job to taking care for you baby within the mentioned period, would directly suit me as i think i am the right person for the job due to my past experience in childhood education institute in Sidney.
Moreover, i will start my course here in university for a year, and i would be grateful that half of the year my expenses could be covered by you. I have two hours lecture in a week, all of these are in the mornings, so i would commit by taking care for your six year old child. The reason why you should hire me is, because of my past experience and certification as a well trained babysitter.
Apart from my work i also appreciate to past my free time within the park at toddlers play area. I could meet other parents and would advise them some of the tactic to improve their children development mentally and physically. This gives me a special sense of satisfaction for helping the community to develop.
I hope you would be interested to meet me in person so you can ask further relevant questions concerning the job.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Joana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ioned period, would directly suit me as i think i am the right person for the job...
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...riod, would directly suit me as i think i am the right person for the job due to ...
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... the right person for the job due to my past experience in childhood education institute in Sid...
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...ation institute in Sidney. Moreover, i will start my course here in university...
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...urse here in university for a year, and i would be grateful that half of the year...
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...k, all of these are in the mornings, so i would commit by taking care for your si...
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...hy you should hire me is, because of my past experience and certification as a well trained bab...
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...eet other parents and would advise them some of the tactic to improve their children develo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well, apart from, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5520361991 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63830008562 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0715190981 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4545454545 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254657618788 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08986132957 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539510029794 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132830961979 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519312535135 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.