agree or disagree to open anew movie theater in the town

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agree or disagree to open anew movie theater in the town

In today’s progressive and sophisticated world where we live, no one can turn a blind eye to the significant effect of television and movies. In this regard, some are inclined toward the opinion that opening a new movie theater could be considered as a good idea, while others on the extreme end of the rope may think that is not worthy and we may spend this money on something return in more benefit to the community like schools or hospitals. From my perspective, the first claim looks rational and I will elaborate on my points of view in the following article cogently.

The first exquisite point to be mentioned is taxes. Opening a new movie theater in the neighborhood mean more taxes will be paid to the county, Meanwhile, this extra money will help in building new schools and hospitals to the neighborhood. To illustrate that, I can use my personal experience to explain that. While I lived in The Woodland, in Houston, TX. They voted for opening a new theater in the neighborhood. The vast of the majority of people voted with the agreement, therefore, they built it within 6 months. It was son nice and big, with 10 show halls. After a while, they opened new schools and clinics in the area, depending on the taxation from the theater.

Another equally noteworthy point in this issue is to create a good opportunity and chance for the resident to find a new career and job vacancy. In another word, this means reducing unemployment. I remember that my mother was looking for a part-time job and finally she had the chance to be enrolled as a coordinator in the same center. Thus, through her job with my father’s job, we had the chance to live in good circumstances.

Finally, movies could be considered as one of the most effective ways to deliver information or the idea to the audience. So, by creating a good chance for showing these type of films, mean that there is a tremendous effect on the people to educate and develop themselves. I remember a result of the survey for one of the magazines show that more than 70% of the people prefer to get easy information through a short film style like a documentary film.

T wrap it up, all the after-mentioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that opening a new movie theater will add more to the neighborhood. It will increase taxation, job vacancy and education to the community in general and the individual in specific.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71158392435 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82909886538 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51536643026 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3062185848 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.65 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.15 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119685216371 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370230891765 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602270081666 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718256408617 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533822073737 0.0645574589148 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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