Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'onebig traffic' jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
Nowadays the number of cars has reached its peak, and this trend has created several problems including traffic congestion in the streets. To my mind, the main reason for this can be due to the developments in the car industry. An effective solution for this problem can be increasing the cost of ownership, as well as accountability of owners in front of society.
Over the last century car manufacturing factories have increased their productivity level considerably. As a result, because of the competitive environment in automobile industry the average cost of cars has become reasonable for the public. However, a century ago only a limited number of people could afford to purchase cars which considered to be a luxury buy. Oppositely, today cars are one of the primary goods that ordinary people can posses. Therefore, it is natural that people have an intention to own cars.
Obviously, this needs to be controlled by governments to provide society with safety and comfort. To address this problem government should increase the cost of owning cars by introducing higher taxes for vehicle property and fuel consumption. By this way, people might decrease the excessive use of cars in order to save their money.
Admittedly, the detrimental effects of overusing cars should be taken into consideration. Therefore, governments should limit the number of cars that can be owned by a particular family or person, because nowadays it is very common to have more than one car in one single family. As a result, the public might feel accountable and they will perhaps use their cars for important purposes only.
To sum up, this problem threaten the humanity if the abovementioned solutions would not be implemented.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18505338078 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95109001179 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580071174377 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2621141951 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225435848219 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838862991276 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375822976337 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127314660666 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531258865718 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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