Some people believe that capital punishment should never be used. others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
Although some individuals are of the thought that the death penalty should never be imposed, other people think that it should be legalised on the most grievous criminals. While sentencing most serious offenders to capital punishment is an easy and quick solution, I believe that all human beings have a right to live and so should never be allowed however major the crime is.
On the one hand, punishment as death sentences for serious crimes provides a short-term solution. By announcing these kinds of punishment, the government officials can take them off streets and deter happening of crimes including smuggling, premeditated murders, patricide, human trafficking, and smuggling. Thus resulting in a decline of serial criminals and repeated offenders in society. In Singapore, for example, when capital punishment was imposed on smugglers and drug traffickers there was a tenfold decrease in such offenses. However, I believe that these sentences are unjust because we are infringing on someone’s right to live.
On the other hand, capital punishment should not be sentenced irrespective of the severity of the crime for it is inhumane to do so. To live is a birthright of every human being and executing or hanging a criminal is being cruel with him. If they are criminals, the law-givers cannot do the same and eventually become a criminal in the name of justice. For example, a questionnaire conducted by one of the press reporters of South India revealed that 60% of people replied, ”criminals should never be hanged till death, how can the court be so harsh!”. I believe that no one including the jury has the right to be so cruel that criminals are executed.
In conclusion, some would say that for very serious criminals, the sentence of death is just for it is a practical solution. I believe this kind of punishment is against humanity and should never be used whether the crime is major or minor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08150470219 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87895153591 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532915360502 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9078191525 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.785714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.513780549004 0.244688304435 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168546458433 0.084324248473 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145096224119 0.0667982634062 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33718943432 0.151304729494 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161617146885 0.056905535591 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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