The greenhouse effect is one of the most heated topic of modern society. What are the main problems it causes? And what are the solutions for it?
The greenhouse effect has been becoming an ever-increasingly prevalent cause of concern for people around the world. Consequently, some people are apprehensive about the negative influence of it. This essay will illustrate the leading impact of it before moving on to the corresponding remedies.
Not only has the greenhouse effect threaten the existence of many species, but also interfered with/posed threats to modern society. In fact, global warming caused by the greenhouse effect has molten wide ranges of icecap over the last decades. This phenomenon raises sea level dramatically, destroying many animals' habitats and increasing the risk of their extinction. Meanwhile, the ever-increasing sea level could also interfere with humans by inundating a large amount/number of land/resources, especially farmland, which is one of the scarcest resources in modern society. Fortunately, governments and people around the world spare no effort to tackle this phenomenon and have made some progress.
Governments and scientists are working together to cut down the emissions of greenhouse gases by substituting fossil fuels with clean energy, which produces fewer greenhouse gases. Currently, the combustion of fossil fuels constitutes the most significant part in the production of greenhouse gases, which are the leading cause of the greenhouse effect. To reduce the dependence on fossil fuels and alleviate the greenhouse effect, governments encourage both individuals and companies to use clean energy, such as solar power and wind power, by subsidizing electric automobiles or raising green taxes. Meanwhile, given the fact that drawbacks of the existing clean energy impede its popularization, it is also crucial for researchers to solve those drawbacks. Solar power and wind power, for example, ebb and flow, so scientists need to find a new way to store energy for nighttime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, while, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64436619718 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15820339133 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1908510404 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.307692308 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174061352152 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606088655001 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563866013264 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109906700161 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152853513186 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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