You have a problem with a neighbour Write a letter to your neighbor i your letter Describe the problem say how long it has been a problem Explain what action you want the neighbors to take

Submitted by igasmr on Fri, 02/07/2020 - 08:46

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you that the inconvenience that I am facing from your home is loud music till late night. Firstly, First of all, Let me introduce my self, I am the guy who has been living for 3 months beside your villa. Recently I have shifted my home from Rockville, Washington. As my family insisting me to move due to my son's exam center. Actually, my son has been studying in an Arts college and doing some presentation work as well for the upcoming conference.
Let me come to the point directly, the main problem we are often hearing from your resident is the volume of your music is high. As a consequence, my son not able to do the paper and presentation work. Will you please get down the volume of your speaker. So, my son would get some time to prepare a thesis for his conference meeting. This might need a couple of weeks. After that, you can continue on what you have followed in your usual way.
I hope you would understand the problem and take necessary action on this. Please do not take this issue as a low priority. we need this to happen swiftly as soon as possible. Thanks for the patience.
Regards
AK

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Average: 7.3 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 288, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ted my home from Rockville, Washington. As my family insisting me to move due to m...
^^
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...the point directly, the main problem we are often hearing from your resident is the volume of you...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... not take this issue as a low priority. we need this to happen swiftly as soon as ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, so, well, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39252336449 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48021254643 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61214953271 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2258339149 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6666666667 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2666666667 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203825696036 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610556316562 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785283802547 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140304877855 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483365969941 0.0580467560999 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 288, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ted my home from Rockville, Washington. As my family insisting me to move due to m...
^^
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...the point directly, the main problem we are often hearing from your resident is the volume of you...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... not take this issue as a low priority. we need this to happen swiftly as soon as ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, so, well, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39252336449 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48021254643 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61214953271 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2258339149 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6666666667 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2666666667 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203825696036 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610556316562 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785283802547 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140304877855 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483365969941 0.0580467560999 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.