The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalisation produce positive effects to everyone.Do you agree or disagree ?
In this modern era, most of country welcoming MNC and oversea organization.Consequently , globalization increased and world become global village.Whether this trend is advantageous to everyone or not.However,i strongly believe to this statement.My stance is justified further.
There are numerous advantages of globalisation on everyone.To initiate ,inviting multinational companies is enhance trade and business of host country and consequently increase the economy of respected nation and also it could help to improve infrastructure of particular area, public transport system ,education quality.To cap it all, higher employment opportunity.Moreover,numerous people travell to the country for business and tourism purpose ,which increased foreign exchange in host nation.Also ,its contributes to the country's economy.
In addition to this,due to globalization food industry also grown up and dwellers can avail opportunity to devour variant food and its recepies.not only food industry but new medicines and drugs are improved.
Neverthless,despite having ample of advantages, there are few dangers are observed,the most concerning one is that the pollution.This is to say, plenty of MNC and foreign industries exhaust dirty water and toxic gases into the atmosphere which leads to water and air contamination respectively.
To conclude,wrap up the discussion, although few danges like pollution, my reason justified that globalization boost economy and create higher job opportunity.so ,i believe that these trend is beneficial rather than being an impediment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16363636364 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.98816865749 2.80592935109 142% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.255020859 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 271.2 106.682146367 254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.0 20.7667163134 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.8 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0629774251311 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261282771592 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343625341037 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0261282771592 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343625341037 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.6 13.0946893788 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.02 50.2224549098 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.2 11.3001002004 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.34 12.4159519038 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.49 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.0 9.78957915832 347% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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